[i=s] 本帖最后由 伊法 于 2014-7-16 02:07 编辑 [/i]
[size=4]上集回顾： [url=http://www.lelezhen.com/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=34252&extra=]伊法战记-前传 第二集-梦之初[/url]
作者语：
请听我给大家讲一个感人的故事。本集的文字较多，还请大家耐心读完它。
下面黑框里的话基本是起解释说明，还有人物内心独白作用。
（PS:前段是德兰的内心独白，后段是守护者的内心独白。）
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下一集：[url=http://www.lelezhen.com/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=34700&page=1&extra=#pid645009]伊法战记-前传 第四集-被遗弃的人[/url]
在故事的最后，还会有一段我精心製作的MV来做故事情节的补充。
特典 苹果君的故事：
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结束语：
这是我尝试在故事情节里刻画情感，不知道最终的效果如何？
还有向美剧学习，采取多线路剧情进程，都算是一种尝试吧。
（PS:我这里走的是双线剧情，德兰线和守护者线。）
如果你觉得这里存在什么问题，请回帖告诉我，我会虚心接受并改正。
如果你觉得你被这个故事感动了，也请回帖告诉我，让我知道，我的付出得到了回报。
然后。。。问题来了。{:1_266:}
我知道大家一口气看三集很爽快，但是我更新的速度其实很慢的。
去P园看过我故事的朋友肯定知道，这第三集也是刚刚更新的。（其实我是拖稿狂人。。。不过要是有朋友没看过瘾，可以去P园看正传，因为正传已经完结了很久，再都发过来难免有挖坟的嫌疑。默默的放个“[b][url=http://www.pockyland.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=38767&extra=page%3D1%26filter%3Ddigest%26digest%3D1%26digest%3D1]传送门[/url][/b]” ）
时间，都是一点点挤出来的，为了保证质量，我的想法是宁可慢，也不要赶。所以还请大家多多理解。
伊法战记，向大家分享每一份快乐，每一份幸福！感谢大大们的支持与鼓舞！
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